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Post by Deleted on Nov 30, 2018 3:23:20 GMT
Doing more art so ya Post below if you want to be entered in a drawing for free art. I'll probs draw at random within the next few days.  |
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Post by Deleted on Nov 30, 2018 4:47:31 GMT
why not eh lol
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smg515
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Post by smg515 on Nov 30, 2018 5:10:36 GMT
draw yourself doing an aggressive fortnite dance and I will make it my profile picture for most things. or you can do a video I take both.
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Post by Deleted on Nov 30, 2018 8:56:59 GMT
haha what a very proportionate image i like. that stare is humanly impossible to do, hecc i cant even rotate my head
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Lucas
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Post by Lucas on Nov 30, 2018 13:43:01 GMT
no anime
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Waspter
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Post by Waspter on Nov 30, 2018 13:57:31 GMT
draw a cool wasp avatar for me please <3
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Post by Premintex on Nov 30, 2018 14:07:58 GMT
sorry but mine is alright
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Post by Deleted on Nov 30, 2018 16:23:30 GMT
haha what a very proportionate image i like. that stare is humanly impossible to do, hecc i cant even rotate my head shhh I've seen your art, you're good I need practice ;3; teach me, master |
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Post by Mafrans on Nov 30, 2018 17:41:22 GMT
I'm not an artist but I'm damn good at complaining. So that's what I'm gonna do. All right, here we go: - You cant rotate your head that far without rotating your upper body (mostly the shoulders) along with it.
- The head is disproportionate, the proportions should look more like this (using Andrew Loomis's divided ball and plane method)
- The shoulders are too symmetrical. Humans' shoulders naturally angle slightly in the direction they're facing.
- Nobody holds a mug like that, you should try it yourself. Next time you can try doing the pose you want yourself and seeing the result. The biggest issue with the current hand is that the thumb is behind the mug, which is an unnatural grip.
- The shading on the shirt is off, assuming the light source comes from this position
- Make sure to draw the hand before you draw whatever is in it, that way you can avoid unnaturally proportioned hands.
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Post by nick on Nov 30, 2018 23:48:47 GMT
Make me.
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Post by Deleted on Nov 30, 2018 23:53:43 GMT
I'm not an artist but I'm damn good at complaining. So that's what I'm gonna do. All right, here we go: - You cant rotate your head that far without rotating your upper body (mostly the shoulders) along with it.
- The head is disproportionate, the proportions should look more like this (using Andrew Loomis's divided ball and plane method)
- The shoulders are too symmetrical. Humans' shoulders naturally angle slightly in the direction they're facing.
- Nobody holds a mug like that, you should try it yourself. Next time you can try doing the pose you want yourself and seeing the result. The biggest issue with the current hand is that the thumb is behind the mug, which is an unnatural grip.
- The shading on the shirt is off, assuming the light source comes from this position
- Make sure to draw the hand before you draw whatever is in it, that way you can avoid unnaturally proportioned hands.
Thanks for the feedback~ Yeah, right now art has been more a way to make $20-$15 here and there. Not so much a professional or ever wanting to go into it considering I'm a physics & biomed engineering major, lol But I agree I didn't do the best with the anatomy. I also (self-criticism, here) think I made her face too... masculine? Anyway, I offered up to do some free stuff because I recognize I need the practice, lol |
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Post by Deleted on Nov 30, 2018 23:57:40 GMT
I'm not an artist but I'm damn good at complaining. So that's what I'm gonna do. All right, here we go: - You cant rotate your head that far without rotating your upper body (mostly the shoulders) along with it.
- The head is disproportionate, the proportions should look more like this (using Andrew Loomis's divided ball and plane method)
- The shoulders are too symmetrical. Humans' shoulders naturally angle slightly in the direction they're facing.
- Nobody holds a mug like that, you should try it yourself. Next time you can try doing the pose you want yourself and seeing the result. The biggest issue with the current hand is that the thumb is behind the mug, which is an unnatural grip.
- The shading on the shirt is off, assuming the light source comes from this position
- Make sure to draw the hand before you draw whatever is in it, that way you can avoid unnaturally proportioned hands.
As an artist, i can say that mafrans can crit very good |
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Post by BlueMoon on Dec 1, 2018 0:28:28 GMT
oh meeeee XD
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Post by Alco RS11 on Dec 1, 2018 4:47:58 GMT
cool art
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Mafrans
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Post by Mafrans on Dec 1, 2018 12:51:43 GMT
I also (self-criticism, here) think I made her face too... masculine? I'm going to keep referencing to Andrew Loomis's work here (mostly because it's the only art book I've ever read) but when drawing "pretty girl" faces you have to be incredibly careful when positioning the facial features or the face will turn out too masculine. See i.imgur.com/N2DCRpt.png |
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