?eta/?lpha
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Post by ?eta/?lpha on Jun 14, 2018 14:53:53 GMT
I wan't opinions and criticism plz.
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Post by kunochan on Jun 14, 2018 15:01:48 GMT
If it makes you feel any better, I don't think I can ever draw that great. Very creative, I like it.
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Post by StevenNL2000 on Jun 14, 2018 15:36:04 GMT
I like it, I assume you were going for a Hitman pose. A few comments on the suit:
Ties always have a smaller strip below the big one. You don't normally see it because it goes through a loop on the backside of the big strip, but it does of course show when the tie is turned over. The collar of a blouse is usually more pronounced. It's also rather rigid, so it's nearly impossible to fold it. The rule is that the tip of the blouse should show below the jacket near the wrists, but this is not absolutely necessary if the blouse isn't tucked in either.
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?eta/?lpha
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Post by ?eta/?lpha on Jun 14, 2018 15:48:10 GMT
I like it, I assume you were going for a Hitman pose. A few comments on the suit: Ties always have a smaller strip below the big one. You don't normally see it because it goes through a loop on the backside of the big strip, but it does of course show when the tie is turned over. The collar of a blouse is usually more pronounced. It's also rather rigid, so it's nearly impossible to fold it. The rule is that the tip of the blouse should show below the jacket near the wrists, but this is not absolutely necessary if the blouse isn't tucked in either. I actually did draw the smaller stip (I know my ties), but it's hard to see and point out. It's near the top of the tie, the part poking out. Thanks for the advice on the rest though, I'll take it into account in future drawings!
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Post by Deleted on Jun 14, 2018 15:53:06 GMT
Wow, This looks amazing. You should try selling some of them , or put your work onto mc-market. People will request there and buy what you give them
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Post by Deleted on Jun 14, 2018 16:26:55 GMT
I like ur style of art
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Post by square on Jun 14, 2018 17:18:54 GMT
mr stark i don't feel so good neato, you're really good, although it feels weird to look at a pixelated character with a buff shape in the suit. probably just me but either way it's good - i can think of multiple things this could be.
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Post by ?eta/?lpha on Jun 14, 2018 22:55:29 GMT
@designatedsly - I do get told to sell my art or make a profit with it, but I wanna keep it as a hobby. I already got annoyed of having it as a subject in school, so making it into a profiting system would take the fun out of it. But I'm glad you see it has the potential! @roned - Thanks! I thought it would be unique to mix realistic with pixelated. square - Wasn't ment to be buff. Most suits make you look that way due to the hardened feel, and he's ment to be wearing it loosely, it's a few sized big. Thanks for the feedback!
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Post by DaddyRadlof on Jun 15, 2018 6:34:20 GMT
I wan't opinions and criticism plz. i actually fucking like this alot nice work ma man
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