RoboEx
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Post by RoboEx on Oct 26, 2017 23:04:23 GMT
So i'm pretty bad at building, but i was inspired to build an interesting halloween themed spawn. This is the current design for the spawn, probably the last too. I'm open to any sort of criticism and I welcome suggestions. The schematic name is robotexplorer20 if you guys are interesting in taking a look yourselves. imgur.com/a/NlG8l |
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Post by Deleted on Oct 26, 2017 23:06:55 GMT
Looks amazing tbh, some jack-o-lanterns would be cool.
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Post by Deleted on Oct 26, 2017 23:10:12 GMT
pumpkin farm could be a little less linear, looks good though
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LightUk
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Post by LightUk on Oct 26, 2017 23:39:48 GMT
Nice, not sure if it is good to post schematic names to the public, because there always might be some kind of troll removing your schematics, once i posted one of my amazing schematics then few days later it was gone -_-.
ONT: Very nice spawn, better than some of the spawns found on total freedom with this theme.
That house there could have had a roof and some of the flat places could be made more hilly.
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Post by DexStarr_ on Oct 26, 2017 23:43:42 GMT
I can't view the image. omg it's fake he got my ip.
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RoboEx
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Post by RoboEx on Oct 26, 2017 23:47:53 GMT
Nice, not sure if it is good to post schematic names to the public, because there always might be some kind of troll removing your schematics, once i posted one of my amazing schematics then few days later it was gone -_-. Yeah, i have backups for this map. most of my schematics are pasted on forums tho... whatever though also, thanks for the advice ill see what i can do |
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Post by BabySharkDoo on Oct 27, 2017 1:33:46 GMT
Nice, not sure if it is good to post schematic names to the public, because there always might be some kind of troll removing your schematics, once i posted one of my amazing schematics then few days later it was gone -_-. ONT: Very nice spawn, better than some of the spawns found on total freedom with this theme. That house there could have had a roof and some of the flat places could be made more hilly. A tip is to immediately download your spawn in the schematics list of total freedom. Then you store the ".schematic" file somewhere safe and you can keep reuploading |
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Premintex
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Post by Premintex on Oct 27, 2017 6:06:39 GMT
It’s actually pretty good! Nice work
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Post by Deleted on Oct 27, 2017 6:10:17 GMT
The Circle Design is quite good I like it. Though, as for the farm, you could've added some varieties to it. Like try decorating it with flowers and paths, etc.
For the House, It's horrible, make sure to put depth to it and add some variety to it, mix it up with some stone, cracked bricks, etc.
Also, excessive usage of Diagonals can destroy the build entirely. I suggest using more circular design.
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Post by Deterno on Oct 27, 2017 8:13:17 GMT
It can be improved on a lot, but I'm going to go in detail with everything and mainly the farm.
Everything is flat, and plain. Seeing that you have orange class, maybe add a pattern/design underneath it using wood or stone, it'd make it look better. By pattern, I do not mean some crappy checkerboard stuff. Try to add another level, especially in the farm. For certain areas, make it go up one Y level, (up a block) and make it fit in with the landscape. With the tree you built on the right hand side, you can tell you overused the use of clay on the tree, all it looks like is a normal tree, with some weird colored blocks on it and cobwebs on the side. You need to actually make it feel as if that tree is deserted/dead/haunted like it would be in halloween. Instead of putting leaves, consider changing it to just the branches and log to make it feel dead. Might I also suggest you change the biome maybe to swamp to give it that detail of Halloween, and I also don't really like how at the bottom of the picture, the glass seperating the two secters is 1 block thin, that could be increased. Your house in the back is really boring, flat and squarish. I could suggest redoing the shape, adding depth into the build, using stairs, slabs and walls, adding a roof, then slowly removing certain parts to make it look all broken and aged. I cannot really say anything about the grave yard since it's out of the frame. Could you please provide me a picture of that?
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OfficialLeo_
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Post by OfficialLeo_ on Oct 27, 2017 10:42:51 GMT
I really like it!
Nice job.
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