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Post by Deleted on Oct 21, 2017 17:49:24 GMT
It's a work in progress build so it may look bad right now. The Admin Hotel, is a hotel for every admin on TF. It has a total of 19 floors and 11 rooms per floor. So far 8 admins have already claimed their rooms. If you see anything wrong with the build please notify me, Admeda or, Andrew2561. Post your thoughts and opinions below!   |
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Post by Deleted on Oct 21, 2017 17:53:18 GMT
There is no need to be so rude, this is why I don't want you on this server. |
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Post by SavnithTheBoat on Oct 21, 2017 17:54:00 GMT
It looks amazing |
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Post by Darth on Oct 21, 2017 18:13:52 GMT
It looks amazing Smooth |
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Post by Deleted on Oct 21, 2017 20:50:56 GMT
cool
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Post by andrew2561 on Oct 21, 2017 21:59:44 GMT
It's still unfinished though we only have like 4/19 floors done.
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Post by Alosion on Oct 21, 2017 22:22:30 GMT
There is no need to be so rude, this is why I don't want you on this server. It looks amazing Yea, it really does, doesn't it. Right, so if you're going to voice your opinion in a negative way, you don't need to be so bluntly rude about it. Even if you're going to voice your opinion like that, instead of for example, just giving some nice criticism about the build, don't delete your post and change what you said just because somebody commented on what you said. If you don't mean it, it's kind of pointless, isn't it? |
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Post by ?eta/?lpha on Oct 22, 2017 1:38:04 GMT
The exterior looks off-centered and like it was was rushed in 1 minecraft day. The interior of rooms where decent, yet required a little more detail. I suggest more exterior designing and make the floors' halls look more lively. other then that, the build is pretty good (but it will never replace the markbyron hotel  ). |
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Post by Deleted on Oct 22, 2017 1:40:18 GMT
The exterior looks off-centered and like it was was rushed in 1 minecraft day. We'll try to fix it asap, thanks for your suggestion! |
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Post by Alosion on Oct 22, 2017 2:23:09 GMT
Hey, so here is an ONT post about the thread. In my opinion, the hotel looks too boxey, try removing some corner blocks on the sides to make it look more natural. The balconies feel off-centered, and I think you over did it with the number that you put on the front. I think you should have some indoors rooms and maybe balcony crossovers. I think some other blocks like wood patterns on the hotel for diversity. I also think some sort of a glass archway would be nice in the front entrance.
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Post by Deleted on Oct 22, 2017 2:45:25 GMT
Hey, so here is an ONT post about the thread. In my opinion, the hotel looks too boxey, try removing some corner blocks on the sides to make it look more natural. The balconies feel off-centered, and I think you over did it with the number that you put on the front. I think you should have some indoors rooms and maybe balcony crossovers. I think some other blocks like wood patterns on the hotel for diversity. I also think some sort of a glass archway would be nice in the front entrance. Thanks for the suggestion, will work on it. |
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Post by Deterno on Oct 22, 2017 10:10:18 GMT
As a master builder, I personally say the build is horrible. There's a lot of areas were you can improve, especially on the block choices, shape, details, balcony's, and the depth.
Also, many people including admins have made better versions of this. I don't see the point in making another one
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Post by Deleted on Oct 22, 2017 11:14:35 GMT
you don't need to finish it to look good, it already looks naive, pathetic, slumpy concrete building. God don't even use stone for buildings, you're not primitive are you?
If you think im being rude, no im not, im just stating facts that are fucking obvious.
I was about to ask Admeda if I can help him but seeing this post makes me cringe
Eww what's that, why's the terrace hanging like that. Physics doesnt exist in mc but goddamn that still looks ugly
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