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Post by Deleted on Jul 14, 2014 19:49:02 GMT
1) Minecraft username:
Ryan_K12122) Twitter and Skype:
Twitter: Ryan_K1212
Skype: ryank12123) What date I joined TotalFreedom:
About early February or late January4) Do I speak English:
Yes, English is the only language that I know how to speak/write.5) What describes me best when it comes to building?:
I'd say organically-pleasing.6) Servers that I am a part of that are well known building wise:
None.7) How I would rate my building skills from 1-10:
About a 7 or 8.8) How often can I be on the server?:
About 4-5 days a week.9) Have I watched building tutorials?:
Yes, I have10) Recommendations:
None yet11) What's my timezone?:
GMT+/-4:00
Eastern Standard Time12) Do I currently have a title on the server?:
Yes, I am a Super Admin13) Screenshots of my build:
link to my build pictures
14) Proof it's my build:
wjb21301 watched me build it.
15) Have I provided Total Freedom with any of my great maps?:
No, I have not
16) My PMC or MinecraftForum account if I have one:
Both my PMC account and MinecraftForum account are Ryan_K1212.
17) Will I be active on the server after getting master builder?:
Yes, I will.
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Post by Deleted on Jul 14, 2014 19:52:42 GMT
Good luck!  |
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Post by Deleted on Jul 14, 2014 19:59:13 GMT
The roof on the house (especially on the inside) isn't that detailed.
And also there is a lot of empty space in there i would suggest building seperate rooms or just open plan rooms
Edit: im here to give criticism so im not trying to say that your build is bad, im telling you areas you could improve. just bare that in mind
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Post by Robo_Lord (Xoizchyk) on Jul 14, 2014 20:01:17 GMT
It's okay
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Post by Deleted on Jul 15, 2014 1:55:13 GMT
I think you copied this build because I saw this same exact house same everything in devacraft did you make this in devacraft?
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Post by Deleted on Jul 15, 2014 3:05:26 GMT
I think you copied this build because I saw this same exact house same everything in devacraft did you make this in devacraft? Yes, I made the build on devacraft but then copied it and made it on totalfreedom also |
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Post by Deleted on Jul 15, 2014 3:25:42 GMT
There is indeed a lot of empty space in this build. The walls outside of this build is very interesting. The roof seems a bit plain, and whats up with the glowstone checkered pattern? First its like checkered, then it just goes all over the place, and I'm like "wtf?". You should work on your interior designing skills quite a bit.
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Post by Deleted on Jul 15, 2014 3:32:19 GMT
There is indeed a lot of empty space in this build. The walls outside of this build is very interesting. The roof seems a bit plain, and whats up with the glowstone checkered pattern? First its like checkered, then it just goes all over the place, and I'm like "wtf?". You should work on your interior designing skills quite a bit. I made it symmetrical, it's not checkered, well I didn't try to make it checkered |
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Post by markbyron on Jul 15, 2014 3:40:05 GMT
I removed some negative drama about the creative designer. Master builder is not an admin rank and how many there are makes no difference provided they're artistically skilled. I would like to see master builders that have the ability to create new terrain maps that we can be used as server defaults with a small but creative spawn and plenty of building space.
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Post by Deleted on Jul 15, 2014 16:47:18 GMT
I removed some negative drama about the creative designer. Master builder is not an admin rank and how many there are makes no difference provided they're artistically skilled. I would like to see master builders that have the ability to create new terrain maps that we can be used as server defaults with a small but creative spawn and plenty of building space. ^ Im not the one for terrain, although i could make a map with a program i have but i don't know how i would give it to you. |
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Post by 3.14159265358979 on Jul 16, 2014 0:05:49 GMT
There is indeed a lot of empty space in this build. The walls outside of this build is very interesting. The roof seems a bit plain, and whats up with the glowstone checkered pattern? First its like checkered, then it just goes all over the place, and I'm like "wtf?". You should work on your interior designing skills quite a bit. I made it symmetrical, it's not checkered, well I didn't try to make it checkered Try not to make everything symmetrical |
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Post by Deleted on Jul 16, 2014 1:32:47 GMT
I made it symmetrical, it's not checkered, well I didn't try to make it checkered Try not to make everything symmetrical It's kinda most of how i build, but that can change. |
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Post by 3.14159265358979 on Jul 16, 2014 1:49:02 GMT
Try not to make everything symmetrical It's kinda most of how i build, but that can change. Please do, don't make everything symmetrical otherwise it will end up looking ugly |
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Post by Deleted on Jul 16, 2014 4:36:35 GMT
It is pretty good it is just that there is too much glowstone imo O-O
And the colors don't tie together that well ._. But it is pretty good c: GL!
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Post by Deleted on Jul 16, 2014 5:16:44 GMT
I agree with Newo, the floor needs to be diversified but I like how you actually put a good interior in it.
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