yoogrounded
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Hell yeah full member rank buddy!
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Post by yoogrounded on Apr 19, 2019 23:30:40 GMT
this is my entry for the master builder rank. Its called Office Park  |
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JagWire
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Woof
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Post by JagWire on Apr 19, 2019 23:56:32 GMT
I'm no master-builder myself, but I would say that you need a lot more detail, and improve the overall shape of these buildings, they still look "Basic", perhaps you could experiment with various materials to make it look a lot better.
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xfilez
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paint me like one of your french girls
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Post by xfilez on Apr 20, 2019 6:21:15 GMT
Firstly, you haven't used the correct application template so you cannot be accepted for Master builder either way. Secondly, as Jaguar said above, there's a lot of room to improve in terms of shape, variety of blocks, and detail. Especially, around the buildings - they feel quite bland.
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Post by StationaryHotDog on Apr 22, 2019 10:38:31 GMT
You guys are so tight , obviously these builds took dedicated effort in order to create. These are one of the best builds I have ever seen. Good job
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Post by Deleted on Apr 22, 2019 11:18:44 GMT
Nice builds, but you have to fill out the application form
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RoboEx
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Redstone is basically my love language
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Post by RoboEx on Apr 22, 2019 17:49:52 GMT
You guys are so tight , obviously these builds took dedicated effort in order to create. These are one of the best builds I have ever seen. Good job We aren't saying that there is a lack of effort or time involved. Personally I do aim to offer constructive criticism, that often times end up being seen as blunt comments such as "Could use finer detail in the bushes etc" that being said, from what i can tell the buildings are empty, and while that isn't the worst thing, filling the buildings would make the build considerably better. plus he didnt even use the right format. |
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Post by Deleted on Apr 27, 2019 0:59:05 GMT
Looks like something i made back in 2012. There's next to no details in it whatsoever.
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