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Post by $Riyrah$ on Jul 4, 2016 14:35:19 GMT
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Godzilla
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what the fuck
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Post by Godzilla on Jul 4, 2016 14:47:44 GMT
sick trailer cus im in it <3
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XxChrisProxX
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Post by XxChrisProxX on Jul 4, 2016 14:52:20 GMT
Good work!
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Post by Deleted on Jul 4, 2016 15:53:58 GMT
Great trailer! The thumbnail is fancy as well <3
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blackedout
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Post by blackedout on Jul 4, 2016 19:14:35 GMT
I fucking love it
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Post by Deleted on Jul 4, 2016 21:24:28 GMT
2:07 - 2:11 Fucking spawn pvper.
/smite xNyanPanda Spawn PVPING /smite Riyrah_ Spawn pvping
Seriously though, good work!
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Post by $Riyrah$ on Jul 4, 2016 22:41:00 GMT
Thanks for all the support so far!
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Post by Deleted on Jul 4, 2016 23:32:21 GMT
"Enter A Entire" *an, that was slowly killing me.
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Post by Vaporeon on Jul 4, 2016 23:36:38 GMT
Kewl
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Post by Deleted on Jul 4, 2016 23:45:29 GMT
Ayy my castle on youtube!
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xfilez
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paint me like one of your french girls
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Post by xfilez on Jul 5, 2016 1:31:43 GMT
nice job! I saw two spelling/grammar errors though. :I
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Post by Bullet on Jul 5, 2016 1:40:11 GMT
Nice Trailer (that intro is used so much but its still nice). Should of put (secretly Bill Gates) 2:35.
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Post by $Riyrah$ on Jul 5, 2016 10:08:41 GMT
I didn't want to delete the video and post the edited one. So I put annotations of the grammar mistakes and suggestions. nice job! I saw two spelling/grammar errors though. :I "Enter A Entire" *an, that was slowly killing me. Nice Trailer (that intro is used so much but its still nice). Should of put (secretly Bill Gates) 2:35
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Ince
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life is boring, thanks useless virus
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Post by Ince on Jul 5, 2016 13:44:35 GMT
what is that *da fak*?
Good work gj!
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Post by Deleted on Jul 5, 2016 13:55:27 GMT
nice job! I saw two spelling/grammar errors though. :I I see 20+ You Don't Capitalize Every Single First Letter In A Sentence.
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